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THE POOR PONY By Lauren Dermody 29/05/2018

5/30/2018

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One time, Holly Horse was in the nice cosy barn. She had a new baby foal.
One day, the farmer was checking on them and found out that
Polly Pony had bad eyesight
The next morning, Holly horse discovered that her foal was gone!
She was so worried.
So then she asked duck, but duck said “Sorry, I did not see her, I hope you find her soon.”
Next, she asked goat, but goat said the exact same.
So she went back to her field weeping. Then the farmer came back with her. The farmer had her the whole time! She was just getting the injection for her eye!
Holly horse felt so relieved.
THE END 
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3 Comments
Nuala
5/30/2018 11:02:28 am

A lovely story,with a happy ending. Well done Lauren

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Barbara
5/31/2018 03:15:31 pm

Well done Lauren, A beautiful story , I love the way you used other animals in your story,

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Deirdre
5/31/2018 03:32:57 pm

Great story Lauren. I love how you used interesting verbs like discovered, weeping and relieved.

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